"Wings"

   "Wings"

If love had wings

It would fly

To your door;

Seeking entrance...

To offer itself

And so much more.

It would

Shyly knock...

Take one look

At your face,

Offer itself...

To all old fears

And tears

Finally erase.

If love

Had wings,

It would come...

Straight to you,

Climb into

Your heart...

And stay...

All life through.

If only love had wings! Valentine

Reviews

[SmittyJas]

Darling if love had wings it would say sentimental things.

[Coyote Poetry]

Beautiful and hopeful thoughts.
"All life through.
If only love had wings! Valentine"
Sometime all we have is hope. One day we shall find our beloved once again. Thank you for sharing the powerful poetry dear friend.
Coyote

[Robert]

If only we did have wings. A very tender piece were Valentine.

[Valentine]

Thank you Robert for your kind words. Kathie

[~]

giving love wings so it can land on the hearts of people and nudge them towards doing the right thing. If only your wishes could always come true. Your heart sings of beautiful things!

[Valentine]

Thank you for your sweet review. Kathie

[Leslie Philibert]

An endearing, romantic poem. well done !

[Valentine]

Thank you Leslie, I always appreciate your input ..Kathie

[R Smith]

if only Kathie, we could send love everywhere, it might change the world, lovely write :)

[Valentine]

Changing the world will take more than just wings I am afraid. Personally I do not see how one can hate someone they never met. Kathie

[armin]

beautiful and lovely write.
I enjoyed the read.
Good job.

armin. ...

[Valentine]

Thank you for stopping by. Kathie

[An owl on the moon]

So very beautiful... a deep, tender longing to fly across the distance and be one... I so often ache for wings too.

[Valentine]

Thank you Craig. Kathie

[Larry Davis]

I like the melody of this poem

[Valentine]

Thank you Larry. Kathie

[andrew mitchell]

A lovely write Kathie from the heart

[Valentine]

The winds movement over stationary objects, making them dance to its own melody is awesome. Kathie