"Devil"

'Devil'

I hoped, I cared
I planned I dreamed...
I loved in despair
The devil it seems.
Destroying all...
He ever touched.
Being love's fool
I cared to much.
I loved... I cared
I hoped and I dreamed
That devil has destroyed
My life..it seems.

Jesus..Get him good!

       Valentine 

 

Reviews

[Coyote Poetry]

I don't know. Can't blame the Devil for all things. Nice flow of thoughts and I like the ending a lot. Thank you for sharing the excellent poem.
Coyote

[Leslie Philibert]

A tough ant-devil rant ! Maybe too much would be better. Nice one.

[Adam Whitworth]

well done

[Michael G.]

He may have destroyed; but, with God in the fight, he can't win all.
Good write, Kathie.

[Sheila Kline]

Oh yes, he is the destroyer, but God in in control of all!!!!!!!
Very wise words my friend!!

[Shawna]

Well done! Love this!