"Interlaced"

   "Interlaced"

Every time, love sees it's face,

Tenderly wrapped in love's embrace;

It wonders how it flew so high...

Angel's wings... in the sky.

When love sees, its own face,

A pair of hands, interlaced...

Two hearts pounding, loud and clear.

Silent voices speak, "Please come near."

Love sees itself...in your face,

A two way feeling, not erased;

By the worry, of life today,

Love holds on, with nothing to say.

For love feels, the warm sweet glow;

That only two hearts together...know.

Valentine

Reviews

[SmittyJas]

Love always finds a way to interlace two hearts forever.

[R Smith]

lovely poetry Kathie and so heartfelt, i really enjoyed reading this :)

[andrew mitchell]

A very sweet warming write Kathie

[wordman]

two hearts beating as one

[Perkele.7885]

Interwoven, interlaced, bound together, with hearts aglow
it's my rule of two, two hearts that know!

[Terry O'Leary]

You've revealed the essence...!!!

[Valentine]

Thank you Terry for reading my scribble. Kathie

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Love knows and sees its reflection in the faces of those who truly love... it senses it in the holding of hands and wishes not to be complicated by lust, which seems to permeate today's hypermedia-drivien society... nicely done, Kathie

[Valentine]

I agree with what you said. We are worried about young family members who think lust and hicky's are love. Today they do not seem to want to get to know the inside of the person they are dating. Only looks matter. Kathie

[Firestone Feinberg]

beautiful words full of warm feeling! FF

[Valentine]

Thank you for taking the time to read this.

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Very nice rhymes.

Though I can assure you: one heart alone can know love

[Coyote Poetry]

Thank you for the beautiful poem. I like the word interlace. When two people are interlaced together. A good life is possible. I like the complete poem. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote