"Would You?"

'Would You?'

If I crawled inside...
Would you keep me warm;
Wrap and hold me close,
Keep me safe from harm?

Could I snuggle tightly...
To your broad chest;
Lay...my weary head,
While I find...eternal rest?

If I crawled inside...
Would you hold me tight;
Chase away all fears...
Free my darkest...nights?

If I held out my heart...
And soul...to you...
Would you flee or stay;
Just what would you do?

    Valentine

                 

Reviews

[sereenaoutloud]

Sometime there is nothing better than being completely encased in a hug!
Love this Kathie!

[Valentine]

You bet...and I received many. Miss them too. Kathie

[R Smith]

He would hold you close i'm sure, this has the feel of a time now passed and the longing for it to return, beautifully written Kathie :)

[Valentine]

You have it correct Richard. Kathie

[SmittyJas]

I would never let you go fleeing if for fools loving if for the real man holding her in his arms at night till dawns early light taking away all her fright.

[Valentine]

And when it is totally impossible for him to be there???? Kathie

[andrew mitchell]

A soulful write expressed with softness

[Valentine]

Thank you for stopping by and reading this. Kathie

[wordman]

just lay it all out there and i believe he would invite you in

[Valentine]

I did, and he loved me faults and all. Kathie

[wordman]

of course ,we love faults and all

[Perkele.7885]

I would let you put your worries in my pocket and rest your weary head on me awhile.

[Valentine]

I use to have what I called my safe place, sadly it went with him. Kathie

[ANTO]

This is really vulnerable and dare I say, cute Kathie, in the best way possible. It is such a loving sentiment - some might think it weak to - maybe say it exhibits dependence but what is love if not mutual inter-dependence, thats how i see it anyway.
Thanks for the RR my friend. ;)

[Valentine]

When I was very ill, I wrote this to my husband, and yes, he was there. Kathie

[DoormanDan]

Ah, this has to be one of the very first, and one of the longest living, questions that we ask our lovers(either out loud or in our minds). Very relatable. Fantastic job :)

[Valentine]

Thank you Dan for stopping by and reading my scribble. Kathie

[Firestone Feinberg]

This is beautiful. i love how it all ties together! --FF

[Valentine]

Thank you for the kind words..Kathie

[Michael G.]

The quiet questions lovers would ask lovers. Might not always get the answer you are searching for though, if each is honest. Beautifully done, Kathie.