"Heat Of The Night"

 "Heat Of The Night"

As I lay...in your heat..

In the early morning hours.

I can feel, your heart beat...

In the room the scent of flowers.

Earlier...our two hearts raced,

And rapidly beat as one.

Then in the silence, slowly paced;

And welcomed the morning sun.

Laying in the aftermath,

Of perfect love and bliss.

I wonder if other lovers have,

The thrill, that is in our kiss.

All to soon the sun does rise...

The start of a brand new day;

And we stow our passion away;

Til the night, when it returns to stay.

As I again in your arms lay;

Flying to places I have never been.

Hitting new heights where I long to stay;

And never return to earth again.

Valentine

Reviews

[Coyote Poetry]

A amazing poem of passion. I like the desire for the night where two lovers can find pleasure and peace. No weakness in the outstanding poem.
Coyote

[Jack...]

The heart does have a tendency to fly high above everything else when it is in love, and never wants to return to the earth again. Very nice Valentine.

[Sami Khalil]

"As I lay...in your heat..
In the early morning hours.
I can feel, your heart beat...
In the room the scent of flowers."
Wow. An awesome poem . Those first lines drew me in for a great delight...Bravo...:)