"I"

   

             'I'

         I exist...

     But I do not live.

  Come across many...

   Who cannot forgive.

      I gave my heart...

  It was returned, broken;

  When I asked, "why'?

  Not a word was spoken.

    I asked my God...

  "Please tell me why...

     People walk out

   With no good-bye?"

       "If I do exist...

  Please God tell me,

Why all of these past hurts,

   Will not set me free?'

  Valentine

Reviews

[armin]

I gave my heart...
It was returned, broken;
When I asked, "why'?
Not a word was spoken
Nicely penned moving piece of poetry. I enjoyed the read.

armin. ..

[Coyote Poetry]

New world my friend. People talk less and want less human contact.
" I asked my God...
"Please tell me why...
People walk out
With no good-bye?"
I rarely have a long conversation. I don't believe God had anything to do with our lack of concern. Tech had stole away conversation and human contact. I miss the days of long talks and laughter. Thank you for sharing your outstanding poetry.
Coyote

[Lizardo]

Ah I can relate to this piece perfectly...
''If I do exist...
Please God tell me,
Why all of these past hurts,
Will not set me free?''
This one great piece... I love this