"Sun"

              "Sun"

Awoke this morning, to sun in my eyes;

Now wasn't that...a pleasant surprise?

This winter has been cloudy as can be;

But, today...the sunlight welcomed me.

Some how the sun, drives away winter's blues;

Chases away sad thoughts...I am happy to lose.

Brings a big smile...all frowns are replaced;

Along with sad thoughts I am happy to erase.

Perhaps this sunny day...is just a fluke in time;

But I am going to enjoy it, while it is mine.

    40 degrees and sunny...Whoopee>

             Valentine

Reviews

[~]

Ahhh, yes that old bunch of golden fellow brings smiles on our faces and yes, tickles our noses and warms our toesies ^_^

[R Smith]

good to hear its nice there, glad you found a happy day to enjoy and write a lovely poem :)

[Woody]

lucky you!!

here it's grey, dreary as can be
rainy and cold, total misery

I like this cheery one Valentine.

[Valentine]

The sun looks great on the heavy snow drifts. Kathie

[Nene]

Wow you seem as happy lark... I can feel your excitement and joy through this poem... Make me miss the sun..... Its soo beautifully written.... I had a big grin on my face after I finish reading it.... Love this line
Now wasn't that a pleasant surprise ......
Its so well written and bought a smile on my face

[Valentine]

Thank you Sweetie for your kind comment. Kathie

[DoormanDan]

This whole poem accurately describes how I feel about all of this snow at this point. JACK FROST NEEDS TO TAKE A HIKE!!! Once again, this is up to your usual wonderful standards :)

[Valentine]

I liked the Jack Frost comment Dan. Thank you .

[MsJewel]

Enjoy your sunny day Kathie. There are more to come I'm certain!

:) Julie

[Valentine]

YES. Today sunny and 40 degrees.

[jacob erin-cilberto]

yes, one really pleasant blue sky day...really lifts the spirits, that is for certain.

[Valentine]

You bet Jacob, that sun was great to see, so was that full moon the past couple of nights. Kathie

[jacob erin-cilberto]

we finally had sun here...but our usual saturday noon tennis was out because of snow on the court...however with all the melting today, we are playing tomorrow...yay...

fresh air again.

[Valentine]

TENNIS, do your bones take that? Mine wouldn't. Smiling..Kathie

[jacob erin-cilberto]

i play twice a week....been playing for about 34 years...we have doubles groups...

and play unless it is raining or snowing..

[wordman]

there will be sunshine and there will be rain
good for you, 58 here this month is always topsy terby
65 one day and freezing the next

[Valentine]

We cannot outguess Mother Nature> Kathie

[Coyote Poetry]

I like and agree with your words.
"Perhaps this sunny day...is just a fluke in time;
But I am going to enjoy it, while it is mine.
40 degrees and sunny...Whoopee>"
A sunny day does deserve a whoopee. Thank you dear Poet for sharing the excellent and positive poetry for the sun,
Coyote

[Valentine]

Hope it is a sunny day for you and yours. Kathie

[Coyote Poetry]

It was. A bit warmer and nicer.

[ANTO]

This was sang in old Blues style in my head by Muddy Waters Kathie - truly it was and it was divine. Well apart from the whoopee - I think Muddy is too cool to go whoopee but Im glad you felt sunny enough to write this - Very cool indeed Kathie

whoopee !
Enjoy your day!

[Valentine]

If this was written before let me know as I never heard it. It just flowed from my pen. Kathie

[ANTO]

No - Im not saying that - I sometimes read a poem and its so lyrical that I'll imagine a singer performing it. I would let you know if I had read it before - dont worry on that score my friend.