" Coronation "

 

        " Coronation "

 

The door to life opened,

You walked through

Encompassed love

As it surrounded you.

Giving her the world

In a circlet, a golden ring.

You ceded your soul

And became a king!

 

  Valentine

Reviews

[DoormanDan]

This poem makes me think of medieval times for some reason(I think it might be because of the title and the words you used in it). I like it!

[Valentine]

You are right Dan, the idea came from an old English novel. Kathie