"Sprites"

A try at haiku!!!

 

   "Sprites"

 

      Sprites in the meadow

     Chasing the glowing fireflies

       Light for nature's play.

 

 

Valentines try at Haiku

 

Reviews

[Terry O'Leary]

This is a great Haiku!
Beautiful images!!!
Terry

[Coyote Poetry]

Nice places and visions create by your words. I hope you are enjoying the New years dear friend. I shall be working. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

[andrew mitchell]

I've seen fireflies in Nepal, a great show. thanks for the memories!

[SmittyJas]

Short words but big meaning. I feel the feeling of natures calling so I write about the littlest of the flies that the Lord above created.

[Celie Rose]

I like your poem.....I imagine magical fairy creatures at play with fireflies. Good job. Keep writing.

[RomaJ]

You've created a beautiful scene in my mind. So lovely and magical watching the lights as they dance in the quiet meadow. Nature is filled with wonders. Love this.

[Valentine]

We did this as kids. Kathie

[Willard Wells]

Well penned young lady. You have a new form to work with.

[Valentine]

It took me some time to think of this oldie. Not my best area of writing. Kathie

[Willard Wells]

But you wrote it and enjoyed the time spent writing it, so that's all that matters. And you did a good job.

[Perkele.7885]

Very well done, Kathie! Who, I might wonder eventually, would be chasing who?

[Valentine]

As a kid, we chased both............Kathie

[R Smith]

nice try Kathy, I love Haiku but my 3 attempts left me struggling with it, I think your Haiku is excellent :)

[Valentine]

This is an old write. I do not try these very often. Kathie

[Insight "MH"]

So sweet and so beautiful. Well done!

Insight.

[Valentine]

An old write. Kathie