"Excuses"

"Excuses"

Any excuse,
To open the door;
Walk on out...
As tears drop
To the floor.
Never to care
About the extremes,
Of anothers pain.
You are content...
Upon anothers
Bed lain.
If another...
Weeps alone,
So what!!
Your love
Is gone.
Fickle hearts...
Never cry.
They just
Walk away...
With no last ,
Word of goodbye.

Valentine
 

Reviews

[SmittyJas]

Don't need that kind of person in my life. Would excuse ignorance and poor judgement on my part should see better Person rather near or far. God ways should of taught me better along the ways. Fear not brush off this person and consider them no christian friend let them go on with there miserable life once again. Bless you Valentine may you choose well good friend and lovers sometimes no one can tell.

[R Smith]

extreme sadness here, the loss of love to another and the leaving with no word of goodbye, its so very unhappy, your writing of this one Kathie is fantastic, well done :)

[Roshan Nair]

A lovely poem kathie, the greatness of it lies in acknowledging that most of our acquainted world is filled with those who would make excuses and not care fr anything we experience in life. Its about filtering those individuals and getting closer to the ones that do care about what we go through. Cheers! great write

[Valentine]

Thank you for your kind comments. Kathie

[wordman]

a sad poem Kathie,i wonder what goes through their mind
marriage is forever that's why you need to date for a while and be ready to committ

[Valentine]

To many people think the response of hormones is love. Love and lust are two completely different things. Kathie

[wordman]

that's why you need to make sure your in love and ready for a commitment

[Valentine]

How true. Kathie

[Coyote Poetry]

I don't like excuses. I believe we should go 100% or nothing. You went to many places, emotions and thoughts. Walk away love leave us confused and hurt. Thank you dear Poet for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

[Valentine]

Thank you for reading and your kind comment. Kathie

[~]

I can see your point clearly, although I would add that people have excuses to also come in.

[Valentine]

I haven't ever ran into the come in problem. Ones life should never become a revolving door. Kathie

[Kimberly Miller]

Very well written and deep! Thanks for the read request!

[Valentine]

You are very welcome. Valentine