Between silences

What I felt.

You intrigue me.
Its the first time we've met
Your eyes are all I want to see
Your voice is one that I'll never forget

Between silences 
I look into your eyes 
Between silences 
I forget all your sweet lies

I kiss those sweet lips 
I admire the way they curve with mine as I smile 
My heart begins to skip
This kiss lasts a long while

Between breaths 
I blush and try to think 
Between breaths 
My brain starts to sink 

Your body molds to mine
Your short breaths are like music to my ears
You send chills up my spine
My mind is full of cheer. 

Between dreams
I wake up to see if you are real 
Between dreams 
I wonder if you feel what I feel. 

Author's Note

Ignore any grammar problems please

Reviews

[Lindsey]

I like it it is very good. I could read it 3 times over.

[Ladysue]

This is so beautiful. you penned this with great feeling...awesome..

[JulieNorell]

This is beautiful! I love it!

[KATHY SUE SILLS]

This was an awesome poem!

[Marie Harrison]

Oh yes, you find your self melting like butter the longer you spend time with them. Pretty soon you're in too deep to turn back now. By that time you are head over heels in love. Wonderful poem.

[sarah]

amazing!

[xjust-for-me.x]

Excellent emi loved the way you wrote and the words tell it all hun.

[HopelesslyDevoted]

This is AMAZING! I can't find a single flaw in any of this, and the style, wording, and flow gave me chills. I'm adding this to my favs

[J.M]

I love those moments when you find a poem which perfectly expresses what you have been feeling. To me this poem seems to say that what is good for you is not always what you need - sometimes you need the guy who you know will lie to you because he's the only one who'll make you happy.

[Linear]

Emily, this is really good, even a little sensual, yet so gentle, marvelous poetry