Teardrops

In a teardrop lives hopes and dreams
A teardrop falls down leaving a little stream. 

Tears fall down and soak your skin 
Hoping that they'll never fall again. 

Your heart break mends and your tears fade away
That smile on your face could brighten the rainiest of days 

Tear streams hold all your feelings
So wipe them up and start healing. 

Reviews

[sammyj]

i really like your style of writing

[xjust-for-me.x]

GREAT write emi love it hugs

[{someone:.:unknown}]

i like this writing, i wish my heart could do this, and i wish my tears could go away ;P

[*Evelen*]

This made me smile:] i loved the last two lines;
"Tear streams hold all your feelings
So wipe them up and start healing."
well done.

[Dayzie123]

I have never thought of a teardrop like this. This is great. Keep writng

[Linear]

Emily, thats a lovely poem, very well written