My Light

To my light...my hope in the world...the person who will drang me home when im drunk of high off of just koolaid and pocky the one that will kiss my tears away and the one who is always be there even in the after life...

In my world dark and alone,
I found a light
How brightly it shown

So beautiful and warm
The feeling it had
I knew from then on
I'd no longer be sad

That light is my world
It shines all around
It tells me to be happy
without making a sound

I now see the world
Now as beautiful and bright
Just like the day
I found my light..

Author's Note

tell me what you think ^__^
i wrote this in math class and got in trouble lol but the teacher liked it so i was like mehhh why not ill put it on here and see what everyone else thinks

tell me? do you have a light in your darkened world?
Are you still waiting or looking for it?

Reviews

[Nameless]

Senryu's focus on humanity or human nature. Senryu's consist of 1 stanzas 5-7-5.

[The Rock And Roll Cowbo..]

I like it... simple yet positive... yes we all just need to focus on what makes us happy when times are tough... and remember there are others worse off...
Love the inspirational message of this piece.