Bottled Rain

I’ve always wanted flowers;

I’ve always dreamt of kindness.

I love the rain

And how it blanches blindness.

Of all of the ideas you have

It’s nice to know that one did not

Flutter away.

 

Author's Note

I love the rain.
Would you tell me your name??

Reviews

[ABBY]

great poem. i love the rain to.

----abby

[Emily B]

I want to be a butterfly! And sit back on a covered place and watch the rain.

[lauren emily]

Short and sweet, those are the best kinds :) I really like this one, it's really pretty.
Nice work,
~Lauren

[Larissa G.]

It's the perfect example of short and sweet.
Very, very cute. :) Beautiful and flows well, too.

[speakingcolors]

:) possibly in time. thanks.

[Last Lying Look]

So lovely. It's really great.

[hey]

this is ridiculously beautiful

[Ebb and Flow]

Short, sweet and to the point. I love a good short poem.

[Chelsea]

Beautiful.