Complex Considerations: Seemingly Simplified

Writing in a state of rage,

Knuckles kissed aquiescingly with the blood of my desparity,

My human concerns mean little

To the complex structure that is

The Milky Way,

And all other galaxies that dot the expanding universe.

And still,

I cry.

Has the nature of the human way gripped me,

Or is being trapped

Apt to cark the incorrigible?

Author's Note

What rage I felt....

Reviews

[Broken.]

I seem to follow the same idea of little snippets of anger..
Not endlessly, but not incomplete.

I've been raped today...







BY YOUR POETRY. xD Love yaaaaa.

[J.P.O.et]

You manage to effortlessly work the word 'cark' in here so i have to be a fan of this one. I also took note of a particular wotd sequence cause it really stood out at me. The 'trapped' followed by 'Apt' just really tickles me.
'Apt to be trapped'
I really like that and the whole universal tone of the piece with our 'human concerns' being inconsequential in the grand scheme of things. Sorry it's been so long but I hope to ttys.

J.P.O.et

[Nicole]

I could imagine..
"Has the nature of human way gripped me,"
Genius.
I love how at the beginning it showed your emotions, or how you felt,
Then flowed into astronomical views.
Even using the Milky Way.
Brilliant! xD