5 Steps

I just thought of this randomly, the idea literally popped into my head so i wrote it down.

Life is something you have to love
You cant assume its anything
You must look at it from all angles
Or life is gonna screw you over
Take 5 steps back and see what your life is

----------Step 1-----------
Its nice
You have who you love
Your friends are all here
You are perfectly happy

----------Step 2-----------
It has holes
You have had fights with them
You only have 2 of your friends truly believing in you
You are starting to lose hope

----------Step 3-----------
Its worse then you thought
Your love is crying because of you
Your friends doubt who you are
You begin to fall into the dark

-----------Step 4-----------
Your life is ending
Your love is going to leave you
You have no friends
Your clinging to yourself to hold together

------------The last Step-------------
You see the light
Your love gives you another chance
Your friends never reall left
You fix whats wrong.

Reviews

[Sweeney Bob]

holy frack

thats really, really, really ((mr. L would have shot me by now)) REALLY awesome

the image it creates is vivid and your grasp on life is.. refreshing