Take Me Away

Don't let the world suffocate our love

Take me away, my dear,

From this cruel world,

These flawless roads,

That show me all my flaws,

These cruel eyes,

That strangle our love,

I don’t want to be heartless,

I don’t want to die here.

Take me away.

Let’s go away,

Let’s run away,

To those winding road,

That lead you to me,

No matter where you go,

To those stars,

That illuminated those hopeless nights,

And kept your promises burning in my heart,

To the moon,

Who taught me how to love,

Told me what you told him,

About your sleepless nights,

Your lonely thoughts,

Missing the way I spoke.

Take me away,

From those sugarcoated words,

That burn my skin.

I’ll break, love, I’ll break.

Let’s say goodbye,

To those flashing lights,

Which I know blind you.

To those exploding suns,

That burn away pieces of you.

Let’s just start to drive,

Cutting through the straight roads,

The cruel eyes,

The flashing lights,

The sugarcoated words,

The exploding suns

Take me away,

To lonely lanes,

Where it’s just us,

And our love.

Our eternal love.

Can’t be created,

Won’t be destroyed,

If only you take me away, my love,

Take me away.

Author's Note

I had no inspiration, so I wrote whatever was the easiest for me to write. Let me know what you think!

Reviews

[Coyote Poetry]

A beautiful poem. Had a feel of a song. I liked the want and the need of the words. All of us want to escape to a better place. Thank you for sharing the amazing poetry.
Coyote

[Vasilees Sybissyl]

Thank you so much for your words, sir. They are much appreciated!

[Coyote Poetry]

Was my pleasure and you are welcome.

[apennylate]

My love takes me away in exploding array of sugar-coated sprees... What can I say, this was inspiration in and of itself... Let us run away, till the day ends in... Well penned...

[Vasilees Sybissyl]

Thank you very very much! I'm glad this worked for you!

[apennylate]

Of course, it very much did...!

[Vasilees Sybissyl]

I'm really happy about it! 😊😊

[Alex Ware]

The imagery and pacing of this are both fantastic! The emotion portrayed is powerful. Great job!

[Vasilees Sybissyl]

Thanks Alex! I'm so glad you enjoyed reading this poem!

[Soumya Deouskar]

Ah, this one literally touched my heart. A splendid work, beautiful usage of words.
Keep writing, Vasilees.

[Vasilees Sybissyl]

Thank you so so much, buddy. Your words mean the world to me!

[Shasha]

This is so sweat! The poem is amazing, there's always a shine in your poems, I always love to read them. It's truly written, take me away, wow! Your descriptive language was amazing (as usual) which I think I should not remind or tell you! A great work, keep writing!

[Vasilees Sybissyl]

Thank you Shasha, thank you so much! I'll try to keep writing something, you inspire me to!

Love,
Vasilees.

[Shasha]

Hi, hi, hi!