Draft 1

A Book by VassD

This is a story I started three years ago. It only took about two or three months of constant writing--with lots of long breaks in between--to complete. It's far from done, though.

Chapters

Prologue
Chapter 1 - Acceptance
Chapter 2 - Departure
Chapter 3 - Connections
Chapter 4 - Arrival
Chapter 5 - Discovery
Chapter 6 - Decisions
Chapter 7 - Beginnings
Chapter 8 - Ignorance
Chapter 9 - Changes
Chapter 10 - Sovereign
Chapter 11 - Fragmenting
Chapter 12 - Preparation
Chapter 13 - Trial
Chapter 14 - Reasons
Chapter 15 - Offering
Chapter 16 - Origins
Chapter 17 - Irresolute
Chapter 18 - Revelation
Chapter 19 - Shattering
Chapter 20 - Anguish
Epilogue

© 2012 VassD

Author's Note

I'd like to know what you think of the plot. Currently it's just a straight line, and there is little in the way of subplot. I want to bring out some of the different traits more, right now it seems empty and a little rushed.

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Added on November 16, 2011
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VassD

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I'm a fledgling author with dreams about as big as one of Robert Jordan's books. Maybe more than one on top of each other. I love writing fantasy and science fiction stories (No matter how long a piec.. more..