Let me choose another

Savage girl, do not ravage me further,

just bid adieu and let me choose another.

I surrendered my heart to you, dear,

you played with it for one long year,

and I thought you were guileless,

when you actually were relentless.

It was my bad that I became your lover,

just bid adieu and let me choose another.

I avow that you are very cute and pretty,

but you lack the thing called fidelity,

you used me to please your heart,

having done that, can't you depart?

Be my sister, let me be your brother,

just bid adieu and let me choose another. 

Author's Note

Feel free to put in your opinions, your viewpoints. Criticism will always be welcomed.

Reviews

[barleygirl]

Very vivid, frank, & heartfelt description of how it can feel when you've been used & are ready for it to end. I love the specific details that convince the reader how it's time to go. The tone is matter-of-fact, which is unusual -- no whining misery, just simple acceptance.

[Vatsal Rohilla (account shifted)]

Thank you very much for your beautiful review. I will look forward to other such wonderful reviews from you.

[Country boy183798]

I really enjoyed reading it and found it very beautiful. Well done and keep on writing!

[Vatsal Rohilla (account shifted)]

Thank you very much for reading my poem and giving your valuable opinion.