Love Prayer

I'm a complicated person, what else to say?...

I know we're nothing but past,

and I know you'll just try to avoid,

but I swear, now it can last,

and I swear I won't disappoint.

Please, give me a second chance,

please, let it be like it used to be,

let's just cross our hands,

you'll feel the old flame, you'll see.

This love brought us only the pain,

but let's give it a second shot,

I'll prove you, it's not in vain,

We just have to try, a lot!

So, don't hide the fire in your look,

I know you feel just like I do,
Just dial my number in your phonebook.
I'll always be available for you.

Reviews

[Circe]

sweet and poignant way of beckoning for a love to return... your words are so sincere and loving, it would be impossible not to respond! i like that call to action.. "just dial my number in your phonebook"... how simple it can be, don't think, just act. heartfelt.

[Velida]

thank you.
it is really full of love and pain I'm feeling constantly since we grew apart..
read morethank you.
it is really full of love and pain I'm feeling constantly since we grew apart..
oh, and, by the way, I'm soooooo glad that you reactivated your account :D

[Circe]

it's really tough i know! you need to let your feelings out, and be known! thank you, it is wonderful to read your new writes.

[Aino A Järvinen]

I like it! I think we've all been there with someone or other. Just a chance...

[zainul]

A golden piece from a golden heart
I am impressed by your classic art

[Velida]

I'm really glad to hear that from you,
I'm impressed by your rhyme, too. :D

Thanks.

[zainul]

My rhyme grew from your rhyme
Yours was melodious sweet chime.:D