Remains

You left us those years ago

disappered at first.

Almost drove me insane

as my heart nearly burst.

The stories are now dreams

I wake up hurt.

I remember those memories

clutching tightly my shirt.

You fear me now

I'll wear those crimson stains.

Ash to ash you'll fade

so no nothing ever remains.

Reviews

[Ashley]

You got talent, Ive never been going at writing those.

[Jess]

I felt the pain:(''so nothing ever remains''yeah,it's very easy to say,but for some,,forgetting someone you truly love is a damn suicide..if only the heart easily forgot,and if only the wound and scars easily heal caused by the person you love,then you will eventually learn to love again...anyways,,great piece Cameron

[Aya]

great cameron the rhyming id beautiful here and you express pain eloquently
great write

[justjenn_2u]

Your words totally expel the pain you were put through without holding back any punches. Brilliantly, you remind this person whom hurt you that he/she will pay. Write on!

[RachelReaper]

ash to ash is my favorite line.

[EMMIE]

"nothing ever remains" and that's the sad truth. Beautiful though!

[lei]

beautifully sad...!

[Muse]

I feel the pain...but no need for a mature rating. It's just clean...pure...human emotions running it's fiery course.

[Cameron]

Alright I'll knock it down a few notches. Thanks Muse.

[The Refined Poet]

beautiful and a little haunting from the line "You fear me now"... excellent poem.

Sad but beautifully said my friend, I know you and the story behind... You did a very good job on this. Bravo xx