Secrets
A Story by
Vernika
Her belly bump camouflaged in her crimson lehenga and in the reflection of the sacred pyre.
The bride-to-be walked very slowly, hiding secrets both in her body and in her soul.
© 2015 Vernika
Reviews
Great :) now i wanna see her. awesome write. :)
Posted 10 Years Ago
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
10 Years Ago
Thankyou! :)
10 Years Ago
You are welcome :)
Very good. A beautifully mysterious story told in just two lines.
Posted 10 Years Ago
Very good. A beautifully mysterious story told in just two lines.
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
10 Years Ago
Thank you so much! :)
Beautiful smooth piece of writing.
Posted 10 Years Ago
Beautiful smooth piece of writing.
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
10 Years Ago
Thanks a lot for your kind words! :)
The soul of flash fiction lies in the power of the few lines that it comprises of. And you have revealed the 'secret' beautifully indeed.
Posted 10 Years Ago
The soul of flash fiction lies in the power of the few lines that it comprises of. And you have revealed the 'secret' beautifully indeed.
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
10 Years Ago
Thank you so much! Glad that you liked it! :)
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Added on May 30, 2015
Last Updated on June 1, 2015
Author
Vernika Delhi, Hindu , India
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An aspiring writer. Dreamer. Believer in magic.
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