Shadow smiled

Above the alley - clouds
As a broad wave ,
A lantern trembled ,
Smiled ,
And repaid under the downpour
Of the smoldering leaves ,
They are red , yet.

And so long ,
In the street ,
Echos whisper ,
And they rustle ,
And I can't hear your words ,
Only scraps,
And from the voice maybe
Nothing left ?

Reviews

[Coyote Poetry]

I liked this poem. The short sentences left the reader with something to think about. I like the flow of thoughts leading to the question at the end. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

[Nika Gavruchenkova]

Thank you so much for sharing your thoughts about the poem !

[Coyote Poetry]

You are welcome.