Valfor

I've awakened my mind, now awaken my soul
Somewhere yesterday I was only five years old
Visions walk past, they fade to yesterday
Your merciless violence creates your misery

Somewhere I woke up. Pain filled my hands
My vengeance to kill. Hours untold in the end
Life flows, divisions, as blood pumps through my veins
silence disturbed, the life-shriek calls, and it rains

Cry out!
It's glorious madness
Life signs shall show
The heathens will fall

Cry out!
Through defeat of arms
The religion of harm
metal at heart in the end

I've awakened my mind, now awaken my soul
What is it our people are really fighting for?
Sunset arranges this glorious day
My time has run past, seemingly fey.

 

 

Reviews

[Marina]

"I've awakened my mind, now awaken my soul
Somewhere yesterday I was only five years old
Visions walk past, they fade to yesterday
Your merciless violence creates your misery."

This is my favorite stanza, it's absolutley amazing. I wish i wrote that.
I also like the last stanza. This was amazingley written.
I absolutley adored it.

XxStaySweet,
Rina

[Doug]

ahhh. i see what you mean now.

Cry out!
Through defeat of arms
The religion of harm
metal at heart in the end

this is beautiful. it's all very well done. i liked this one a lot better on the second read. very nice!

-doug-