Senescence

Just love to my life

The older I grow
the more I know
we have better chemistry
we have better mystery.

I loved every moment
I lived every moment
I have you in my life
I married you my wife.

We fought for life
we built our life
we're blessed with Aroha
we're blessed with Dia. (My Daughter)

I have my heart
its attached to you
I will never have one
just true and best like you.

 

- Love and Life

Author's Note

Its Love to my life :)

Reviews

[Ravyne Hawke]

Wow, you taught me two new words today. My dictionary has been staying very busy of late.. lol. With that said, this is a beautiful love poem with passion from the heart. My only suggestion is in the last stanza..

Just true and best like you. - Love and Life

try

as devoted as you.

that wraps up true and best in one word. "Love and Life" do not need to be at the end either as they are understood from the entirety of the poem.

Beautiful job here Singh.. your wife is lucky to have you!

[Vikrantsingh]

Lori just your poems make me to write this thanks again :)

I will cherish your comments forever :)

Cheers!!
Singh :)

[John A Raju]

sweet :-)

[Vikrantsingh]

Thanks John A Raju :)

[PP]

lovely :)

[Vikrantsingh]

Thanks Prathama :)

[PP]

:)

[Vikrantsingh]

:)

[Frieda P]

Lovely sweet sentiments here, such a lover you. Nice, she must be beaming with this one....!

[Vikrantsingh]

Frieda I'm blushing thanks for you wonderful comments as always ;;)
Loved it!
Singh :)

[Frieda P]

Ha woo glad I could make you blush, that made my day ;-)

[Frieda P]

So what did fair maiden say? :-)

[Vikrantsingh]

She loved it :)

[Frieda P]

Lucky woman ;-)

[Vikrantsingh]

^ - ^ thanks sweets ƪ(◦'⌣'◦ )Ʃ

[Baby Ricochet]

This is a really beautiful and moving poem. Outstanding work Sir

[Vikrantsingh]

Awwww....Thanks Ricochet made my day
Cheers :)
Singh :)

[Souladareatease]

Now thats some Beautiful Lights, Adorning Your well written Poem Sir!!!
Pen On!!!

[Vikrantsingh]

Thanks Souladareatease :)
You made me smile :)

Cheers!!
Singh :)

[Souladareatease]

;)

[rhythm&blues]

Extremely sweet, I would have loved to receive a poem as such, she must be very lovely.

[Vikrantsingh]

Thanks dear.... Loved you review sure its been my pleasure you loved it ;)

[Sarmelendez]

You have written something so beautiful. It took my breath away :) I cant wait to see more.You are a very gifted writer.

[Vikrantsingh]

Thank you so much Sarah :) loved your review :)
Smiles
Singh :)

[Sami Khalil]

"I have my heart
its attached to you
I will never have one
just true and best like you.



- Love and Life"
A simple but powerful poem full of life and love ...Words of a true heart...:)

[Vikrantsingh]

Thank you so much Sami :)
You make me smile always :)

Cheers!!
Singh :)

[Sami Khalil]

My pleasure...:)

[Vikrantsingh]

:)

[Sami Khalil]

^^~^^ :)

[Vikrantsingh]

*hugs*

[Sami Khalil]

Just bear hugs for men...

[Vikrantsingh]

ƪ(◦'⌣'◦ )Ʃ

[Sami Khalil]

Hahaha...:)

[smilempsn]

Aahann.. A poem totally dedicated to the 'Love' of your Life...
Liked it.. covered each and every Lovely person you have in life..!!

Be blessed VikrantSingh Parmar ^-^
(A question after reading this poem.. will ask in personal :P )

[Vikrantsingh]

Sure thanks sweets :)
you just bring smile on my face always as you name it self Smilempsn :D

[smilempsn]

:D ^-^

[Vikrantsingh]

;)

[Divyanshu Kachhap]

LOvely poem :) Its about you , your wife and your sweet little daughter

[Vikrantsingh]

Thanks sweets :)