Love of donkey's years

Simply Stuck and I went with the flow

Your heart is pure like Ocean

Your mind is clear as Sky

Your belief is deeper than nitty-gritty

Your resourcefulness is Equanimity

 

Your gumption follows ofttimes

You made me grin at times

You diverted me from seeing red

You’re postponement even my morose

 

Love you is what, I can feel

Abide with me all, I can fain

Loving me was your métier

Kissing me was what your essayer

 

I dethaw when you nuzzle unwaveringly

I dissolve when you suspire solely

I deem you on my pectus

Will beg you so that never depart

Thanks To Frieda :)

Author's Note

Just need your views reviews.

Reviews

[Will Neill]

Vik's I took a look at this one just off the top, I belive you are speaking from the heart and have drawn on your emotions to convey a tender yet light hearted poem. My only dislike is the font you used but thats just me. Nice piece. (I will read each in turn)- I have added you as a friend and look forward to reading more.
Keep Well.
Will

[Vikrantsingh]

Hey Mate Thank you so much. I really cherish your support and encouragement which you are putting forward :)

Cheers!
Singh :)

[Titan]

I dethaw when you nuzzle unwaveringly
I dissolve when you suspire solely
I deem you on my pectus
Will beg you so that never depart

Your initial picture was adult I hope you must rate this one
Adult.
Anyways good work.

[Vikrantsingh]

Thank you so much for reviewing and visiting my page :)
- Singh :)

[Supercop]

Well this one is stunner. What a read my friend.

[Vikrantsingh]

Thank you so much for reviewing and visiting my page :)
- Singh :)

[Cybertooth]

Excellent Writing :) Loved it

[Vikrantsingh]

Thanks you so much :)

[Prritiy]

Your heart is pure like Ocean
Your mind is clear as Sky
Your belief is deeper than nitty-gritty
Your resourcefulness is Equanimity

this poem is all about the love in your heart for your partner. its a sweet write on love and well expressed.

[Vikrantsingh]

Thank you so much Prritiy :)
Loved your review and your visit :)
- Singh :)

[Prritiy]

you welcome :)

[NebraskaHope]

This poem is Well written . I loved every line of it .

[Vikrantsingh]

Thank you so much mate :)
I'm really happy you loved it :)

- Singh :)

[Traci]

It was your title that captured my attention, and I am surely glad it did. Singh this was a piece that was clearly written from the heart and soul, conveying your emotions beautifully. Well done my friend.

[Vikrantsingh]

Thank you so much Traci. I'm glad you loved it :)

Thank you so much,
Singh :)

[Onku Ghosh]

Nice romantic poem..........your forte, Vikram. Could feel the tenderness. Good write!!!

[Vikrantsingh]

Thank you Onku :)
Much Appreciate you review and your comments :)

- Singh :)

[Sarmelendez]

very nicely written

[Vikrantsingh]

Thank you Sarah :)

- Singh :)

[sakshi arora]

choice of word is good it can be a great love letter :)

[Vikrantsingh]

Sakshi thank you so much.

Appreciate your comments :)

- Singh :)

[Kristin Lee]

You've got a couple of language issues that can be easily smoothed out. But the emotion was great! I can tell you wrote this from the heart. Those are the best kinds of poems. They hold great power not just for the reader but the writer as well. Keep up the good work.

[Vikrantsingh]

Thank you so much Kristin :) Appreciate you help and support :)

Cheers!
Singh :)