Adieu

Just got inspired from - Margaux "My Pleasure"

I was felicitous with my aliveness

With my daughter and wife

We had ameliorate chaffers unitedly,

Fallen love, delectation forever and a day,

I was more felicitous with my aliveness now

It turned out to my wretchedness

Banking some more immaterial in my aliveness

Deep in spite of appearance my warmheartedness

I whilst, I got authentic admirer

But no, we were strangers and still we are

So adieu & continue beaming in your world.

 

Author's Note

Its all thought flow, not in real - Just fiction.
Just need you reviews :)
- Singh :)

Reviews

[one sky]

Hey, Singh. Thanks a lot for the mention here. I don't know that my little poem has inspired you to create a beautiful piece like this.

(Author's note...*friction...do you mean, *fiction?)

Nice images.
The poem is so inspiring. It shows how you love your family and how you would do everything for them. You got an admirer...and now you decide to bid goodbye to her. So good! I salute you for that. Nice decision. You should never try to taste a different "menu" if all the good "recipes" are served at home.

Nice nice nice!

[Vikrantsingh]

Wow! I'm simply speechless dearie, Yes, this one is not real its just some random thoughts. I really appreciate your review on my poem :)
- Cheers!
Singh :)

P.S: Yes you must not taste different menu when you got better recipes/food at home :)
Kudos! :)

Thank for spell check for Fiction :P

[one sky]

Haha! I have some typos in my review, too but I've seen them and checked right now. In this site, we learn from others and we also learn from our own mistakes.

Ide nada!

[Vikrantsingh]

Very well said Dearie :) I really loved you poem and I went back to my old times and got something this. I have to appreciate, your work helped me to get this and yes! i'm pleased to have better friend like you in my friend list :)

- Cheers!
Singh :)

[Zero_Edge88]

"Oh serendipitous accidents for what they truly are they never seem to be one. As we break apart, let time itself be just is. For what time is ahead in these lines that we proclaim we are alive we soon kiss the dust with the touch of our heart because what time it is for us to know that we are here, we are soon gone.

However, the nearness of a heart, the fondness of the mind and the reminiscence of the soul coalesces into love for those who are around us. So to move not because in time but because of our life must we say not adieu but 'and to you my friend Time, I bid you peace be with you.' For what time brings in a single minute, a lifetime of memories, mistakes and endeavors will be closed in the blink of an eye.

So here's to serendipitous accidents for we are but strangers on this train and we all will find our way back home."

Got to love it :) Sorry been busy with real life but hey managed to snag one in eh? :)

[Vikrantsingh]

Thank you so much Zero :)
Your reviews are always powerful with much sense and knowledge to share. I love to see more and more reviews from you and will do the same from my end :)
- Singh :)
Bless you :)

[Robbie~xoxo~]

This showcases your warm heart... your imagination flourishes and continues to brighten your star.
Keep penning, my friend! :)

[Vikrantsingh]

Thank you so much Robbie :) Love your reviews on my poems always :)
You're most welcome :)
read moreThank you so much Robbie :) Love your reviews on my poems always :)
You're most welcome :)
-Singh :)

[Thomas Fitzgerald]

It is a piece thats best bid while reading really, well written.

[Vikrantsingh]

Thank you so much Thomas :)
Your comments encourage me to write more :)
Cheers!
- Singh :)

[Thomas Fitzgerald]

Your welcome.

[Vikrantsingh]

Thank you again :)

[sakshi arora]

nice imagination with wonderful words

[Vikrantsingh]

Thank you so much Sakshi :) ^ - ^
God Bless You :)
- Singh :)

[Kristin Lee]

We were strangers and still we are...I like this line of thought.

[Vikrantsingh]

Thank you so much Kristin ^ - ^
Loved your comments as always :)

- Singh :)

[Manali]

This is a different one from you.. This is deep and quite profound. Well done! Loved it. :)

[Vikrantsingh]

Thank You So Much Manali, I'm glad you loved it.
Your reviews are worth on my poems :)
-singh :)

[Baby Ricochet]

Great poem Singh, interesting choice of words

[Vikrantsingh]

Thank you BR, Always make me smile :D
-Cheers!
Singh :)

[Sami Khalil]

Wow. The title , the wording , the thoughts are all great. A powerful write...Bravo

[Vikrantsingh]

Thank you so much Sami :)
- Cheers!
Singh :)

[Sami Khalil]

My pleasure...Any time...:)

[Vikrantsingh]

:D............:D

[Sami Khalil]

^^~^^ :)......

[Vikrantsingh]

:-PPPPPPPP

[Sami Khalil]

Hahaha............

[Vikrantsingh]

Buahahahahahaha :P

[Mark]

The words paint a picture that seems to be in pieces, colored very nicely and it fits the pictures as well. I liked it.

[Vikrantsingh]

Thank you so much Mark for your time and review on this piece :)
- Singh :)

[SyberRose]

I like that last line...very nice...Enjoyed Singh and i loved the photos too...Rose

[Vikrantsingh]

Thank you so much Rose, I'm glad you liked it :)
- Singh :)