Unborn Grief - Girls

This was very touching/strong.This normally happens in India.. I tried to pottery something which is real and which happens everyday - resources.

I'm in nirvana with angels

Got all love from them

Looking down

Weeping upside down

Trenchant for my mater 

Even for that begetter 

I was your part my mater

Wished to develop firm and tall

Just like my brother

But I was bumped off 

By my begetter

What was my mistake?

Is it just I was doll? 

I prayed for you mater

You live longer and stay firm

You loved me every single moment

You feed me with love and notions

Next time I want to be your doll

Please don't murder me

Live with me & don't leave me alone.

Author's Note

Genuine Comments Please :)

Reviews

[smilempsn]

Hmm.... that made me sad and happy at the same moment :(
Sad, because it actually happens at a much higher growth in India
Happy, because you wrote and described it so wonderfully..

The grief...the feelings wrapped in words beautifully..
nice one VikrantSingh Parmar....

Another amazing write :)

[Vikrantsingh]

Thank you so much Smilemspn :) Loved the review :)
- Singh :)

[Victoria PoetryBunny]

You wrote well about a sad topic around the world. The title says it all "Unborn Grief."

[Vikrantsingh]

Thank you so much Victoria :)

[Titan]

So touchy and expressed.
I'm so amazed with this feelings how people can do this.

[Vikrantsingh]

Thank you so much for reviewing and visiting my page :)
- Singh :)

[Supercop]

This is reality if so then you have mastered it :)

[Vikrantsingh]

Thank you so much for reviewing and visiting my page :)
- Singh :)

[Cybertooth]

Great read and write :) Its reality :O that's shocking nicely penned my friend

[Vikrantsingh]

Thank you so much for reviewing and visiting my page :)
- Singh :)

[shallimarRose]

I love the pictures you have here.. the poem gave me a melancholy feel.. I tried to send you a couple of rr but you dont accept them I guess.. so how can i get you to read? lol xoxo Rose

[Vikrantsingh]

Thank you so much Rose :)
I will accept it I just disabled because I have more than 160 Read request which are pending
ones i'm done i will accept it again :(
Sorry... thank you for your visit :)
- Singh :)

[shallimarRose]

LOL yes, I get so many and then sometimes I have only a few.. I have to keep reading every day I fall so much behind..

[Vikrantsingh]

Same here i just skipped few days and they turned up to 200+ request :(

[poetdoug]

You have taken a serious situation and approached it in a most creative way here my friend.
Thank you for this. It certainly presents facts in not only a poet, but revealing light to all concerned.

[Vikrantsingh]

Thank you so much Poetdoug :) Much appreciated your words and your reviews :)

[poetdoug]

You are most welcome my friend

[Robbie~xoxo~]

Oh dear... this is sooooooooooooo heartfelt! It brought tears to my eyes...seriously...
The pictures are amazing, and your words are tangible tendrils coming from the heart and soul of an Angel. Beautifully displayed, Singh!~xoxo~

[Vikrantsingh]

Thank you so much dearie :)
I'm pleased you liked this poetry.. :)
Cheers! xxxx
Singh :)

[Robbie~xoxo~]

I loved it, Singh... it touched my heart. XXXX :)

[Vikrantsingh]

Thank you so much Robbie :) Thanks for your review again :)
It really helps :)

[Robbie~xoxo~]

I'm glad, it's my pleasure. :)

[Vikrantsingh]

^ - ^ Thank you :)

[Brandon S. Whitten]

We know not what we do and think there aren't any consequences. It will be a rude awakening. Splendid read and write on a very sensitive issue. Thank you for sharing.

[Vikrantsingh]

Welcome Brandon :) Thank you so much for your review and upliftment :)
- Singh :)

[Prritiy]

a nice and touching write. it a sad event that happens even today and its not poor or illiterate who do it but even the literates and so called elite ones.

[Vikrantsingh]

Thank you so much Prritiy for you preview and understanding of this matter properly. Yes, thats true now a day more educated people are committing such weird crime and they are enjoying it.
I feel pity on such a narrow and illness which they are suffering :(
Hope someday we can make change and we will be the part of better society :)
- Cheers!
Singh :)

[Prritiy]

You are welcome.
Yes we await for the day when there will be human love for one and all only.

[Vikrantsingh]

Yes indeed :)

[Prritiy]

........... :)