Wonderment

Love to my Life & My Wife

Life was childlike

Love made it perplexed still gratifying

Travelled fleetly but not in your absence

It is lofty

It is burnished

Adhere to me today

Leave me for noone

I'm your & you be mine

I loved it the way 

You aforementioned it twice

You love me & I responded

I love you too

Since, then

I want to olfactory perception you tegument

I want to olfactory perception you hair

I want to gustatory sensation your lips

You are almightiness

You are my wifey

You varied my life

Author's Note

Just Be True :) & Review :)

Reviews

[Ravyne Hawke]

This is a nice love poem, Singh.. so sweet to write this for your wife.. I did have some troubles with these lines:

I want to olfactory perception you tegument --what is tegument? and why not just say "smell"?
I want to olfactory perception you hair -- again, just say "smell"
I want to gustatory sensation your lips -- why not say "taste"?
You are almightiness -- do you mean divine?

Those lines sound so technical, it reads like a medical journal instead of a love poem.. Hope you don't mind the questions and suggestions.

[Vikrantsingh]

:P I was trying something new here ;) If i won't use those glossy words.. which you mentioned technical :P this would sound again monotonous and not that fresh ;)
I hope you got what I mean to say ;)
Singh :)

[Ravyne Hawke]

I understand wanting to do something new and fresh.. I just think there are other ways.. like showing a smell or a taste instead of using medical terminology.. but hey, your poem, dear and I do understand what you are saying.

[Vikrantsingh]

Thank you so much :D

[Victoria PoetryBunny]

A really nice dedication, and a lovely write. Thanks for sharing.

[Ankita]

This piece is sweet. Lines 14, 15, and 16 are my favourite. :)

[Vikrantsingh]

Thanks a lot dearie - for your visit and reviewing this poem :)
I'm happy to read your words on my page :)
- Singh :)

[Supercop]

Super and stay blessed my friend

[Vikrantsingh]

Thank you so much for reviewing and visiting my page :)
- Singh :)

[Ruth]

Lovely dedication...your emotion seeps through every syllable :) x

[Vikrantsingh]

Thank you so much PoppySilver :)
Thank you so much for you time and review :)
- Singh :)

[Cybertooth]

Great work and you have a blessed life :)

[Vikrantsingh]

Thank you so much for reviewing and visiting my page :)
- Singh :)

[smilempsn]

Aahaan... Another love poem from Mr. Husband for his wifey :P

Nice one VikrantSingh Parmar :)
Godji Bless you more love and be loved :) :)

[Vikrantsingh]

Thank you so much dearie :)
Stay blessed :D
- Singh :)

[Cody Williams]

Nice emotions! Thanks for sharing!

[Vikrantsingh]

Thank you so much :) Cody :)

[shallimarRose]

A couple of errors I think but nothing major.. I enjoyed reading.. Loving and emotions rang in it.. Rose

[Vikrantsingh]

Thank you so much Rose :)

[Shaun Payton]

The bond of love. A sweet ode to the wife Singh.

[Vikrantsingh]

Thank you so much Shaun... Will check you poems soon :)
- Singh :)

[Shaun Payton]

Cool:) Should be fun

[Dhaye]

Nice and romantic poem, Singh. I won't leave any suggestion here but you can consider those suggested by Lori and SyberRose.

The Romantic Indian writer is here again. So sweet. God bless you and your wife!

[Vikrantsingh]

Thank you so much Dhaye :P Yes i'm trying make this fresh :P
- Singh :)