Truly Deeply Madly - In Love

Dedicated to my Daughter - Aashi

Those exposited eyes

Those adorable lips

Flyspeck nose

That bundle grins

Ah! I'm dying to see you walking

Towards me

& One day you move towards me

And you give tongue to - "Dad look what I got for you"

I bend to see it élan

It’s my name she wrote

With broken letter

This made me cry & smile

I nested her so hard & kissed her

She said - "dad I love you"

I kept mum and hoped-for it to dissolve

Till my heart stop beating

I felt them pertaining my soul

I said love you - my love

Author's Note

Feelings I shared :) I hope you will love it :)

Reviews

[Zero_Edge88]

"Ah they come to us like the snowflakes that shower us so beautifully in the wintry skies as they blossom in the flowery garden that we watch their lives grow so beautifully and majestically. A magic of which we can't even explain there lies a universal truth to us - that our children will grow and be magnetically attracted to our love that we shower them so madly. For what is love given to a child is nothing short of what we give to make sure they make our lives an experience of which will never be exchanged for anything in this world."

My friend, I don't have a child right now but growing up I learned to take care of my siblings and watching them while my parents worked was quite rewarding. Even then when I did my volunteering days I often was with a community of single parents mostly women who have their own children and I acted as their big brother throughout those days. It was a heartwarming experience I tell you. To what I will expect when I have a child of my own biological or not the words of what I begin to say about them is something even I can't fully express of my own.

Wonderfully penned Singh. Have a great day my friend :)
Zero :)

PS: My second book is coming soon so get ready to get a copy of it in your computer ;) You'll definitely love and laugh on this one :)

[Vikrantsingh]

Thank you so much mate for your time and your review :) much appreciated :)
Sure just share me the link from where i can download/purchase?
I don't think this book will be available in India. So i have to download it.
Probably you have to send me the ebook :D
- Singh :)
Stay Blessed :)

[Zero_Edge88]

You're very welcome my friend! :) No problem it was lovely reading it definitely heartwarming for sure! :)
I shall when it's ready and I'll make sure it's available in India. I thought I had Amazon made it available everywhere but I will check it definitely :)
Well the link will get you the ebook so definitely :D
~Zero :)
As to you as well my dear friend :)

[Vikrantsingh]

Thanks bro cheers!

[Victoria PoetryBunny]

A father and daughter bond is a lovely thing. Sweet write. Thank you for sharing.

[John A Raju]

lovely writing vikrantji :-), heart warming, pleasing to the mind, a well felt and well written piece of work, keep it up!! Really loved this one.

[Vikrantsingh]

Thank you so much John :) I'm glad you liked it :)
- Singh :)

[Astro]

"That bundle grins" I like this one, picturing that little beautiful bundle made out of love that inspires such emotion in you each time you look at her. Again, some beautiful sentiments expressed in your off-beat way of original descriptions.

[Vikrantsingh]

Wow thank you again Astro for visiting my page and reviewing my poem. I'm glad you liked this one :)
-Singh :)

[Titan]

Those exposited eyes
Those adorable lips
Flyspeck nose
That bundle grins
Ah! I'm dying to see you walking
Towards me

WOOW such a detailed expressions this is amazing

[Vikrantsingh]

Thank you so much for visit and reviewing my poem.
- Singh :)

[Supercop]

Brillant and power house that was amazed and good work

[Vikrantsingh]

Thank you so much for visit and reviewing my poem.
- Singh :)

[Ravyne Hawke]

Beautiful poem, Singh.. I can see your daughter some day reading this and knowing how much you love her. She will feel so blessed!

[Vikrantsingh]

Thank you so much for visit and reviewing my poem.
- Singh :)

[smilempsn]

:) :) :)
Brought a instant smile on my face..
ThankU for sharing these lovely words :) :)

[Vikrantsingh]

Thank for such a precise and wonderful review. I'm happy that made you smile :)
Like you do us always :)
- Singh :)

[smilempsn]

:)

[shallimarRose]

Awww, love this... There is nothing like a father daughter relationship.. "daddy's girl.. xo

[Vikrantsingh]

Thank you so much Rose :)
Yes she's Daddy's Girl :)
- Singh :)

[Baby Ricochet]

Wow. That's so sweet. It's damn near enough to make me want to have kids. Excellent poem my friend.

[Vikrantsingh]

Hello BR, Yes you must have kids :P
Its really amazing experience can't be expressed in words :)
- Singh :)