The Day I waited for

I love this theorem which is self portrayed and tried to make it some sense via... two love birds meet 1st time eva...

I wait for this in my heart so long

Here it occurred a day

when we met but not for prolong time

It was just for 2 hours

But I felt it for 20 eld

I implored it to say

No matter how hard it was

Still I was ready to pay!

However, It was your grinning,

your appearance,

moreover your orbs (eyes)

Aha! I said and you nested me for 6 seconds

But I felt it thousand times

Thy Prolonged anticipated sense of touch

My kiss on your brow

You tittered

You diffident and groped

Those 2 hours - I pray they occur again

My belief for you now are more thoroughgoing

More literal & more divine

Author's Note

This is just a attempt after long time. I've just wrote this back 2 mins
Hope you will enjoy this.
Perhaps, it has some issue or error do let me know will make changes ;)

Reviews

[Jack...]

The only error I see is that you have been gone far too long my friend. So very nice to see you again. Your poem was fun and that feeling, where 2 seconds feels like 2 thousand seconds because of her and your feelings for her is gentle and beautifully portrayed in this wonderful piece. very nicely done my friend.

[Vikrantsingh]

Thank you so much Jack.. Yes sorry indeed it was long time I was away form WC...
Had some personal issues and now i'm back rolling ;)
I really loved your review and this really makes me to attach - this family for ever :)

Cheers!
Singh :)

[Saddam]

A touching piece.

Those 2 hours - I pray they occur again
My belief for you now are more thoroughgoing
More literal & more divine.

[Quill~]

This is a sweet poem... what sparks are made of.
Nicely done. :)

[Victoria PoetryBunny]

The pictures are sweet, so is the write. I like this line:
"Those 2 hours - I pray they occur again"

[Sami Khalil]

That proves you still have it in you after a long time of posting and reviewing. This puts you back in the mood to write and shine...Bravo

[Vikrantsingh]

Thanks Mate :)
Cheers!
Singh :)

[Sami Khalil]

You are welcome , mate...:).......................

[Marie]

Such sweet pictures...time is indeed a relative thing when it comes to love...

[Vikrantsingh]

Thank you so much Marie :) .. Im happy you like it ;)

Cheers!
Singh :)