Snowy Island

A mutual place.

Snowy Island

 

I wanna look at you ‘till you cry

Then hold you and tell you it’s alright

We can live a life, like our dreams

Snowy Island with flowing streams

Having all the water we could ever want--near,

All the pine cones and fuzzy little bears

The biggest apartment that you ever have seen

Charlie in the back, and inside--a baby

Fires light the night and we sleep it all away

Warmth in our place, a hearth we feel

Lives to kindle, our souls reveal

Series of coincidences called fate

Serendipity was absent but did her thing

Reviews

[Shadows Ember]

I really like this. The imagery is phenomenal and I can actually put myself in that place. Truly remarkable piece.

[V. P. Trujillo]

Thank you very much.

[Shadows Ember]

truly is no problem.

[Michelle N. H.]

I can envision myself there, and you. Being together, that thought alone.. I would be happy, more than happy.

[V. P. Trujillo]

It'll be warm in the summers though, right? Hah.

[Michelle N. H.]

Yeahh, okay.. That can happen sometimes, lol.

[V. P. Trujillo]

xD Alright.

[John Anderson]

Cleverly written with a powerful delivery. Very nicely done!