assumption

my mind will be the death of me

 

Sometimes I feel the warmth of the basement

And I have no reason to question leaving

A movie kiss sends chills up my spine as if I am watching a horror

Feeling as if it will never be me again

 

He left the room without a goodbye

Maybe I caught a glimpse of him seeing me

Looking

Him and I

Not just on the exit

Across the room

In my mind it means he thinks I have pushed too far already

Like a help wanted sign hangs in the window

I see his red and white ‘not interested’ sign hanging there

Another hallucination?

 

All assumptions

From nothing really

The woman in red

alone

Alone

                        Alone

 

Echoing thought

Too much only for myself

Overwhelming thought

 

So much doubt for a situation that does not even exist

To anyone but me 

 

 

 

Reviews

[Chloe..Across the Unive..]

I like this ,, i know many people who fit this poem ..i like this verse;

Across the room

In my mind it means he thinks I have pushed too far already

Like a help wanted sign hangs in the window

I see his red and white 'not interested' sign hanging there

Another hallucination?

Very good and relatable poem ..

Chloe
xoxo

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Its good. Good rhythm but no grammar.

[JC Fox]

A deep and powerful piece, very riveting, good job.

[forfila]

OMG, I feel such relevance to this poem, I loved it. A couple of lines struck me in particular

"A movie kiss sends chills up my spine as if I am watching a horror
Feeling as if it will never be me again" isn't it so true, when we are out of love, that on screen romance seems almost like it is just there to re wound your already bleeding heart.

"So much doubt for a situation that does not even exist
To anyone but me"
Like I said, the relevance is unreal, I feel like I have lived through this poem before....Great write. Read, loved and adored..

Love
Me

[Antony]

S**t! Danielle, I'd like to pick at your mind and see what makes you tick, so much confusion and unstability, is how I am reading this. I like how you express what your mind invisions, very interesting. I am wondering if you really ae having such thoughts, or if this is just for a writing exercise. Altogether, it is a good job at thought provoking the reader.
Antony