Haiku #1

A Poem by Danielle Asher

I have never written a Haiku. Let me know if it is terrible form. Thanks!

He’s back in my life

Our connection unexplained

Why say I love you?

© 2008 Danielle Asher

Author's Note

i've never written a Haiku before so if I didn't do it right, feel free to let me know. thanks.

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Angel's Lady

Good job. Simply put, I do hope it cleared your mind a little.

Posted 17 Years Ago

Phill Oz O'fee

Haiku (Hokku), is usually about some form of nature, where as a Senryu tend to be about human foibles. So, technically speaking, this is a Senryu - but the 5-7-5 syllable format and creative subject matter tends to make me say - who cares - it's a great write!

Phill(ozofee)

Posted 17 Years Ago

1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

mattavelli

Who's back in your life?

Posted 17 Years Ago

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Added on July 9, 2008
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Danielle Asher

not what you would expect, Long Island, NY

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I care about faith,Justice, Equity for all, Peace, love,working toward letting go of all judgment,music, dancing, traveling as much of the world as I can and Chocolate! check out IVAW.org read my fri.. more..