Abstract Theory

Abstract Theory

A Poem by Samantha ~virginpoet

He wrote me metaphysics an abstract theory
he drowned me in a sea of intangible words
his verbs tasted like grains of salt
tiny granules pouring into open wounds
and slowly burning

He produced stinging sensations
that caused a slight pain
he wrote the color
of permanent stains
his letters caused
an aching sensation
in my loins
he made my rib
indentations throb
from his bruising's
with indescribable philosophy
that caused contusions
to my eyes
see he
he scripted

me blindly

He ripped the vision
from my optic nerve
and left me sightless
left me a mess
of purple inflections
upon my retinas
the markings of battered scars
stuck to my reflection
he scribbled his discoloration
on the undersides of my eyelids
and I feel him
in the fullness
of my tear ducts
and I feel him
in the redness
of my protruding veins
and I feel him
I feel him sitting
upon singular lashes
a constant reminder
that he seizes me
as he sees me
differently

Through every etching
of broken flesh
he knows me
speaking in veiled secrets
that secrete the abnormalities of truth
he understands
the silence of my speech
he deciphers the messages
that seemingly holds no meaning
studying the beauty
of my empty voids
as he drafts out
detail on the farthest point
of my psyche
see he, he writes me
metaphysics an abstract theory

A collage
of mystical
metaphors
that others
do not grasp
he teaches me
the ideas
of revelation
with his friction
chafing diction
that claps
to the lining
of my esophagus
as I speak him
as I savor him

Silently swallowing
the formation
of his figures
expansive speech
that sits upon my cheeks
awaiting combustion
a simple energy
yearning to ignite
the depth of his language
as he compels me to breath life
into the passages that I shape
he says that my lips
are like brushes
and that syllables
are my paint
and every time
that I speak
a masterpiece of thought
takes place in the shadows
and I speak him metaphysics
without even speaking
abstract theory's

By Samantha Campbell

© 2011 Samantha ~virginpoet


Author's Note

Samantha ~virginpoet
wrote this back in 12/08/07

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I reeaaaally liked this Sam. Your word choice was stunning! :)

Posted 11 Years Ago


Ppl who plagiarize work like you make me sick. You're not worth a rating to me.

Posted 11 Years Ago


0 of 2 people found this review constructive.

Konigin

11 Years Ago

I'll be careful. It just wasn't right for him to act this way towards you.
Samantha ~virginpoet

11 Years Ago

oh this was nothing you should see the messages I have been getting we had to actually have the cops.. read more
Samantha ~virginpoet

11 Years Ago

Im blocking this fake page so I can no longer comment on this thread lol
@orginality funny keep saying that put it on every poem that you like it wont make it true

Posted 14 Years Ago


@tammytownend funny you keep posting the same comment have you even read the poem or are you just gonna add your crap all willy nilly if you keep posting the same nonsense over and over Ill have to block you

youve already said this so what your gonna post the same review on all my stuff well have fun

NOTHING has been proven you will be sued for slander I HAVE NEVER STOLEN POETRY FROM ANYONE IN MY LIFE so believe what you like

how are you gonna feel when its been proven I AM NOT the plagiarist and you've been harassing the wrong person

have you even looked at the posting dates which proves I wrote it and posted it first or are you blind

Posted 14 Years Ago


I have never thought as abstract as a theory, more an artistic statement or way of being, this made me think, well done, great read.

Posted 14 Years Ago


0 of 1 people found this review constructive.

really really good! :)

Posted 14 Years Ago


0 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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