A Man's Man

A guy walks in
he is basically a burly
reasonably fit shady looking f****r
chest like a barrel
and hands made of fists

He portrays the image
that he is a man's man
like Bukowski or Hemingway

He sets down at the bar
eyeballs everybody

He spoke without speaking
Because silence is the loudest sound

Experience was written
all over his face
it said he could
f**k like art
suck like poetry
touch like fire
make any woman
scream like opera
and cum like nature

By Samantha Campbell

Author's Note

this is still a work in progress ....

The first 8 lines are by robert-james who's poem "The Writer" inspired this

Reviews

[Samantha ~virginpoet]

@leppero of course I asked him a while ago when I had a page there now I cant even see that website he said it was ok then. Keep digging that hole lol funny do I really need to tell you the definition of the word plagiarism I guess so...........

(Plagiarism) a piece of writing that has been copied from someone else and is presented as being your own work

READ THE F*****G AUTHORS NOTE I NEVER PRESENTED IT AS MINE I GAVE HIM CREDIT FOR HIS 8 LINES

WOW You can understand the first word or two I sure hope so cause you sound like an idiot !!!

Why would anyone give credit for using one word that's not saying anything any one else has already. OK lets use the two words in your review "I can" are you gonna give credit to everyone who has said that or even written it Dumb dumb dumb I tell you!!!

To give credit to a specific person you have to use more than a word or two and yes I used 8 lines so freaking what I gave credit and got permission I did nothing wrong so f**k off get a life write something meaningful that is if you can or do you just go around harassing peoples work your jealous of cause it sure looks that way

[Nobody.]

f*****g beautiful! love the blunt and straightforward talk. real poetry. steel toed glory. be proud of this one. it has it's own voice.

[Samantha ~virginpoet]

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[PJ]

I like your 13 lines better lol
I just read robert james poem The Writer
and I must say yours is so much better!!!

[Coyote Poetry]

Remind me of many men I have known. Always over-rate in his own opinion. Age make us men learn the weaknesses we have till a beauty come near. And we are
"Experience was written
all over his face
it said he could
f**k like art
suck like poetry
touch like fire
make any woman
scream like opera
and cum like nature"
I enjoyed this poem. Make me laugh this morning. A excellent poem.
Coyote

[Samantha ~virginpoet]

@leppero its pretty obvious its a collaboration thats exactly what I meant when I gave him credit for his part duh I did not think I had to state the obvious! everyone but you got it so whatever. Have you not read any of my work there are very few poems that were inspired from anothers work its not a crime to be inspired by something now is it or maybe it is in your little world.

Just a heads up when a person is inspired they take it give credit back and make it there own other wise its plagiarism to use the whole.

Your not worth my time but it seems Im worth yours lol

I have already explained them in the past, and I have already reported them for stealing my work before all this s**t talk on here.

All I have to say is look at the posting dates

ohh thank you I see one I missed now I will report them

Why dont you ask GS how many times I have reported my work stolen and even ee cummings work and they have done nothing nor replyed to my messages

and if I had anything to hide I would delete your review seeing how you just posted it 33 min ago

your poems are better HA! thats a matter of opinion
dont you think your bias

theirs nothing wrong with being confident in ones self

[leppero]

o.k samantha,
I will rephrase that comment.
I can sort of understand someone using a few words of a poem that inspired them.
hell that would be the norm.
however using eight lines out of 21 seems a bit excessive to me.
So you say he gave you permission, well thats great then so why did you not post it as a collab, because thats what it is then isn't it? half yours and half his!
jealous? you need to get over yourself and learn to write a whole poem that belongs to you.
I have written better poems in my sleep than the half a poem "and i use the word poem loosely" that you have dripped out your backside and stuck on that chaps.
which if it inspired you that much then why have you destroyed the essence of what he was saying in it.
you are so full of s**t that it's not even funny anymore.
block me. try explaining these links to people.
l
http://www.writerscafe.org/writing/VirginPoet/728404/ fake

http://www.gspoetry.com/i-write-in-lead-spokenword-poems-179520.html original


http://www.gspoetry.com/the-caged-bird-and-i-positiveabstract-poems-301586.html original

http://www.ctadams.com/precious2.html oringinal
http://www.writerscafe.org/writing/VirginPoet/707624/ fake

http://www.gspoetry.com/i-write-in-lead-emotional-poems-167482.html real
http://www.writerscafe.org/writing/VirginPoet/729082/ fake

http://www.gspoetry.com/d-e-p-l-e-t-i-o-n-metaphysical-poems-167713.html original. and one of my most favorite poets whom deleted hername off the site but the poems remain there
http://www.writerscafe.org/writing/VirginPoet/729088/ fake

http://www.gspoetry.com/blended-souls-afire-love-poems-488089.html original


http://www.gspoetry.com/untitled-030411-metaphysical-poems-485339.html real
http://www.writerscafe.org/writing/VirginPoet/737528/ fake



http://www.tumblr.com/tagged/pilsburyrevolution original
her fake has the same name

CandiceRenee done all the leg work getting these links together.

[Samantha ~virginpoet]

@hemihead I did not steal it what do you mean credit after Ive been busted how the hell was I busted I did not hide anything read the f*****g authors note dumb a*s

[Samantha ~virginpoet]

@hemihead no s**t Sherlock did you even read the authors note I gave him credit for his 8 lines

[leppero]

wtf samantha?
i can understand the first word or two but EIGHT LINES?
have you even bothered to ask the original author if you could use them?
keep digging that hole!