Till Final Breath

How the star spotted sky
Meets the ever raging sea
The place that looms so high
A view we cannot flee

Its ever present brilliance
Is constantly ignored
As we search for our resilience
In this ever witless horde

We try so hard to just become
A grain within this pit of sand
We just sink in, we just succumb
Why don't we take a stand

To be a constant in this life
Is to just accept your death
Do not sit away from strife
But live this life till final breath

Reviews

[Rebecca Buller]

A brilliant piece, my friend! Our lives are but a vapor, but death is nothing to fear if we trust God and know that this life is not all there is. Well done:)

[Mark]

That feeling of helplessness keeps many people in their easy chairs staring at the tv. If only we all could make a friend of our death perhaps the world would begin to become a better place.