I Fell in Love With Rain

Its raining here in New York. 

The city streets covered in a layer of water

so crystal clear reflections are hard to miss.

I use to love the rain you see, it use to make me feel less alone 

but now that you're gone--

it changes everything.

The rain makes me sad with all the expectations

Clashing against the buildings in the Bronx

Sliding down tall, glass shadows in Manhattan,

Falling into the Hudson without a care.

The rain makes me sad you see,

'Cause it was filled with memories of you and me;

Embedded into ever drop that fell from the sky.

I also wondered, why? Why it took you so long to leave?

Wrapped in discomfort and drowned by the ghost of our past,

I am a wandering soul and you're still pretty and whole.

Author's Note

Critical Criticism please there is a big difference between criticism and being an ass.

Reviews

[JC]

funny how we see the world in different ways wen we are feeling different emotions. Whether its sadness or joy rain always seems to evoke emotions, really enjoyed this.