October 1st

A Poem by JT Godin

5/6/5

Daybreak brews beyond
Overcast lies, beneath the
Cloudless Jovian skies.

© 2017 JT Godin

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Thomas Fitzgerald

Thomas Fitzgerald

A punch with imagery, how divine, well done, good read.

Posted 5 Years Ago

1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Such a cleverly laid visual! Not quite a senyru but, perhaps has another form?

'Daybreak brews.. ' Yes!

Posted 6 Years Ago

1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

6 Years Ago

Definitely more in the spirit of senryu, but with haiku inspired form/delivery.

6 Years Ago

As many would tell, I can only just pen prose verse! However, do beautiful need a niche sub-heading.. read more

Beautiful simple words,paints nice images in the mind with each word;-]

Posted 8 Years Ago

Great way to record the day in this short but impact-full write.

Posted 8 Years Ago

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Added on October 2, 2017
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JT Godin

Vancouver, British Columbia, Canada

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I write science fiction and poetry. I like to write about how modern society interacts or is affected by rapidly changing technologies. I also have a pet interest in languages, their histories, featur.. more..