FULL MOON
A Poem by Vol
You!
My girl of the
full
moon,
make
me wild.
When
you rolled in
under
the thunder,
the
ground shook
and
my windows rattled.
© 2023 Vol
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Yes, there seems to be a lot of them about, but there's always a standout, moon howler that takes the crazy biscuit and leaves an indelible memory on your mind... Usually just under where the plant holder/ brick or remote control hit you. 😉
Beware the window rattles my friend. Until meeting one, you'll think that saying she was nutter than an explosion in a snickers factory, is just a quaint phrase of endearment 😊
Posted 2 Years Ago
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
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2 Years Ago
She was a fat lady's panties load of endearments... But I digress... Patricia Alice was the love of .. read moreShe was a fat lady's panties load of endearments... But I digress... Patricia Alice was the love of my life
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2 Years Ago
If someone said that about me, I'd want it chiselled on my gravestone as an epitaph... Brilliant! ðŸ.. read moreIf someone said that about me, I'd want it chiselled on my gravestone as an epitaph... Brilliant! 😊
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The full moon shakes up the scene
with wild vibrations ..nice brevity ..
Posted 2 Years Ago
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I smiled:) That must have been quite something Vol. Not easily forgotten.
Chris
Posted 2 Years Ago
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
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2 Years Ago
Smile back...You know, Chris, It wasn't an event... it was eighteen months with the love of my life .. read moreSmile back...You know, Chris, It wasn't an event... it was eighteen months with the love of my life before she died of congestive heart failure. I told her once that every love poem I'd ever written was about her, and I did not even know it until she rattled my windows. Sigh
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Well, so did mine when I read this. So there.
Posted 2 Years Ago
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
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2 Years Ago
Ken,
You shoulda been there!
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Yes, there seems to be a lot of them about, but there's always a standout, moon howler that takes the crazy biscuit and leaves an indelible memory on your mind... Usually just under where the plant holder/ brick or remote control hit you. 😉
Beware the window rattles my friend. Until meeting one, you'll think that saying she was nutter than an explosion in a snickers factory, is just a quaint phrase of endearment 😊
Posted 2 Years Ago
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
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2 Years Ago
She was a fat lady's panties load of endearments... But I digress... Patricia Alice was the love of .. read moreShe was a fat lady's panties load of endearments... But I digress... Patricia Alice was the love of my life
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2 Years Ago
If someone said that about me, I'd want it chiselled on my gravestone as an epitaph... Brilliant! ðŸ.. read moreIf someone said that about me, I'd want it chiselled on my gravestone as an epitaph... Brilliant! 😊
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Some women have a way of shaking our world, don't they? Nicely done.
Posted 2 Years Ago
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
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2 Years Ago
It's the only reason we don't just give up.
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Added on August 2, 2023
Last Updated on August 2, 2023
Author
Vol Gouge Eye, TX
About
My name is Vol Lindsey. I live in Gouge Eye, Texas, a tiny ghost town on Rt. 66.
I am a retired creative writing, English literature teacher. I have been writing poetry and reading publicly since 196.. more..
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