THIRD DEGREE

THIRD DEGREE

A Poem by Vol

When your smile

flashes and burns

across my cheek

I drown in flames.

Emolation is not fun

but an earnest

third degree suicide

dressed in red and yellow,

the afterglow lingering

behind the lids of eyes

squeezed tight against

the onslaught.

Like moths drawn

to the light

of gasoline lives

poured out,

mingled.

© 2025 Vol


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I can't recall having quite such an extreme reaction to a woman's smile. That may be because of the number times they told me to f**k off.

Posted 7 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Vol

7 Months Ago

So far (I'll be 76 on Tuesday) I've only met one... and found out every poem I've ever written is fo.. read more
ETERNITY

7 Months Ago

@Vol, I know who she is. The poem is beautiful. Hugs and bigger hugs.
Vol

7 Months Ago

Glenda,
She is "La Belle Dame Sans Merci"...

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Added on June 1, 2025
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Vol
Vol

Gouge Eye, TX



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My name is Vol Lindsey. I live in Gouge Eye, Texas, a tiny ghost town on Rt. 66. I am a retired creative writing, English literature teacher. I have been writing poetry and reading publicly since 196.. more..