A.D.H.D.

A.D.H.D.

A Poem by Vol

Remember cartoon cars

powered by squirrels in a

wheel? Sometimes I wonder

if deep down inside my head,

I haven’t got something like it.

Everything at rest till some bored

cell gets a wild hair, jumps into

one of it’s handy, color-coded

wheels and takes off running,

spinning, frantic, faster, faster,

till sparks fly, blue smoke rises

into the rest of me and suddenly,

I know exactly what to say next

in our swordplay repartee.

Sometimes the little b*****d

makes me wait with a blank

look on my face till the moment

is lost and it’s just too late. Some

say he’s getting old, but I know

it’s because we had too much

fun in the sixties. So…

Touche!

© 2025 Vol


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Hi Vol! I think you are speaking about your creativity or non- creativity depending upon those neurons and how they spin around in your brain.... sometimes very fast and other times not...a really great metaphor for how and why you write, and I think it's pretty common to have periods of "boredom" in the brain and periods of super excitement...like " some bored cell gets a wild hair...."
Great!
Warmly, B

Posted 7 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Vol

7 Months Ago

Betty,
It's about something I think about once in a while, where do thoughts originate? When .. read more
Betty Hermelee

7 Months Ago

a great guy with loads of smarts!
Always love your writing!
warmly
B
read more
Vol

7 Months Ago

Betty,
Oh... thank you, m'lady... just trying to keep up around herewith the likes of you and.. read more



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I sometimes feel that too Vol, but most of the time I picture a hamster, dead on his wheel for when the thoughts just don't come.
Then I just put my faith in herbal remedies and try to get my thoughts to touch the sky! 😃
I only had 18 months of fun in the sixties, being born in July 68, but it must have been some party because I don't remember a single thing about it!

Posted 7 Months Ago


Is this why we write, Vol?

I started writing in the 70's...did that car get rolling in the previous years?

Maybe I just keep reving the engine and changing the tires...or the pens, or now, the keys.
j.

Posted 7 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Vol

7 Months Ago

Jacob,
Good question! My brain is riddled with ADHD... it is never still and putting some of .. read more
Hi Vol, we sniffed a lot of glue, not just glue, it was Weldwood Contact Cement.
See how I've persevered! I can even remember that name. It's a miracle!
We dropped acid, I was 13, it was my first time, I actually thought it was candy.
Later that night at my grandma's I realized differently!
I called the guys (I never hung with girls) and they were laughing like crazy!
Thanks for being straightforward! You bring back many memories! Oh! Cheers!

Posted 7 Months Ago


1 of 2 people found this review constructive.

Vol

7 Months Ago

Eternity,
I love our swordplay repartee....
Vol
Ms claws

7 Months Ago

And I curtsy to you, holding up my cockade fan, in shreds...
Vol

7 Months Ago

Hahaha... Peek-a-boo...
a zen master would say, "you are not your thoughts. sit. breathe. let the monkeys dance. just don’t join the circus.”
:)

Posted 7 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Vol

7 Months Ago

Laz K.
There is something to what the Zen Master said, or as my Redneck friends say it 'Don't.. read more
Hi Vol! I think you are speaking about your creativity or non- creativity depending upon those neurons and how they spin around in your brain.... sometimes very fast and other times not...a really great metaphor for how and why you write, and I think it's pretty common to have periods of "boredom" in the brain and periods of super excitement...like " some bored cell gets a wild hair...."
Great!
Warmly, B

Posted 7 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Vol

7 Months Ago

Betty,
It's about something I think about once in a while, where do thoughts originate? When .. read more
Betty Hermelee

7 Months Ago

a great guy with loads of smarts!
Always love your writing!
warmly
B
read more
Vol

7 Months Ago

Betty,
Oh... thank you, m'lady... just trying to keep up around herewith the likes of you and.. read more

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Vol

Gouge Eye, TX



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My name is Vol Lindsey. I live in Gouge Eye, Texas, a tiny ghost town on Rt. 66. I am a retired creative writing, English literature teacher. I have been writing poetry and reading publicly since 196.. more..