AWARE

AWARE

A Poem by Vol

Aware

D. H. Lawrence 1885 �"1930

Slowly the moon is rising out of the ruddy haze,
Divesting herself of her golden shift, and so
Emerging white and exquisite; and I in amaze
See in the sky before me, a woman I did not know
I loved, but there she goes and her beauty hurts my heart;
I follow her down the night, begging her not to depart.

© 2025 Vol


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Always ends the same Vol. They always leave you in the end! 😃
They grab your attention by divesting themselves of clothing and then just do one and disappear into the day, leaving you begging for more.
It's a bit like a gentle cooling breeze after a day of silly degree temperatures just stopping without warning... so I'm told, but I hope to find out this weekend as the weatherologists say some scorching weather is due. (Don't worry though, I don't trust them so I'm taking my waterproofs and ski gear too, just in case!
😃


Posted 6 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Vol

6 Months Ago

I'll just sip a nice margarita, and think of you up there in the near arctic...
Lorry

6 Months Ago

Na mate. Try a slush puppy or whatever you guys call those iced drinks that come in blue and red fla.. read more
Vol

6 Months Ago

Helps with the harsh weed...



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Such a lovely read on this warm summer day. My muse is definitely taking notice!

Posted 6 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Vol

6 Months Ago

Kelly,
Lawrence is an "A-List" favorite of mine, and largely because of this poem. I used it .. read more
That has to be one of the saddest poems and not a hint of an apology, Vol! Unlike your usual wit and
wisdom, sir. Plus at a time in the excessively hot UK weather, the cool of a sweet moon would be more than welcome!

Posted 6 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Vol

6 Months Ago

EmmaJoy,
It is a very sad poem, and the very first thing I taught every year... I believe fro.. read more
emmajoygreen

6 Months Ago

' On a clear night in the desert, the moon comes up like a great basketball…' how true that is, sl.. read more
Always ends the same Vol. They always leave you in the end! 😃
They grab your attention by divesting themselves of clothing and then just do one and disappear into the day, leaving you begging for more.
It's a bit like a gentle cooling breeze after a day of silly degree temperatures just stopping without warning... so I'm told, but I hope to find out this weekend as the weatherologists say some scorching weather is due. (Don't worry though, I don't trust them so I'm taking my waterproofs and ski gear too, just in case!
😃


Posted 6 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Vol

6 Months Ago

I'll just sip a nice margarita, and think of you up there in the near arctic...
Lorry

6 Months Ago

Na mate. Try a slush puppy or whatever you guys call those iced drinks that come in blue and red fla.. read more
Vol

6 Months Ago

Helps with the harsh weed...

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Added on July 10, 2025
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Vol

Gouge Eye, TX



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My name is Vol Lindsey. I live in Gouge Eye, Texas, a tiny ghost town on Rt. 66. I am a retired creative writing, English literature teacher. I have been writing poetry and reading publicly since 196.. more..