DON'T WAKE ME UP

DON'T WAKE ME UP

A Poem by Vol

In the beginning was

The Word, and The Word

was with God and The Word

was God.

(Some guy named John)


It is strange, is it not,

that nouns, those persons,

places and things, are all

we have to go on?


We name stuff and our

words become thoughts.

They don’t gather atoms

to become the thing

they mean, but the very

idea of an “idea,” is

suddenly there; I grab

my O.E.D. to look it up

so everyone can agree but

find nineteen meanings

of the word “idea,”

all of them ephemeral

and without substance.


But that’s not what I want

to talk about. This is about

non-existential, existence.

What exactly is the nature

of a “thought?” What are

they made of? Are they

of the same manufacture

as God Himself? Am I,

are you, an idea God

thought up to see what

would happen? When

God has an idea, you

better look out, they

have a way of gathering

atoms to become real.


God is consciousness

incarnate, and we are

the great blue flashes

along the idea of a divine

neural network His mind

holds together by the

simple verb,

I Am.”


© 2025 Vol


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After reading this, my first thought was to allow another reader to take the lead, then, I would follow. But after contemplating momentarily upon what I would say, I decided to go for it. I'm not even sure that you and I are cast from the same mold, as poets, or simply a manufactured thought. If God IS consciousness, then we MUST be what makes up those flashes of a divine neural network, as you so brilliantly and intellectually pointed out. Wow, imagine that!

Posted 6 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Vol

6 Months Ago

Kelly,
Thank you for going for it! I want to set up a colony where poets can live, write, wor.. read more
Lorry

6 Months Ago

Ps... I thought the same thing Kelly, but I stuck with chickening out! 😃



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Seems to me an eternal being couldn't have a first thought so we must have come along mid stream. and if we did it seems our arrival on the scene was not an oops moment but was well thought out with complete understanding of what we would do / not do - what we would think / not think and thereby providing no surprises regardless of what idea we accepted as being original, you know like, the possibility of ( non-living living things ) which seems to be an extension of " you will be like God, knowing good and evil.” Which has always been an interesting statement to me considering they already knew good and the only gain was going to be evil. "Okay, yeah, let's see what this does." So God's thoughts became words and His words gathered atoms and became things. I do believe we are an idea God came up with knowing what would happen. The surprise for me is, knowing, He did it anyway. But I'm really glad He did. And I am glad you do also. Love your work as always it's a journey - carl

Posted 6 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Vol

6 Months Ago

Carl,
You know, the whole God thing is beyond our comprehension... I can't even wrap my head.. read more
carl

6 Months Ago

the physical universe is only a small part of the story, -yes I would believe that and small in so v.. read more
Vol

5 Months Ago

Carl,
Thanks... It might just be my ADD... The journey is SO long, but with so MANY little si.. read more
You are in my opinion at least correct Vol. We are an idea God thought, which is perfectly explained if you know what his preceding thought was after sleeping off testing the first batch and the whole "hagridden mare" thing, later known as the dinosaur fiasco!
So after sleeping it off for a few eons, he knew his next idea better be a good 'un, so came up with us lot and was quite pleased with his efforts, right up until we started talking and thinking for ourselves and you know the rest!
People saying "well I just think" means there is a basis for thought in what they, for want of a better phrase "mouth-flap" but then proceed to prove themselves wrong with whatever guff they spout being the mere brain-twitches of an idiot or madman.
I am, but but they is too! 😃

Posted 6 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Vol

6 Months Ago

Lorry,
Those guys, the ones who only think they think, because they have no idea how they are.. read more
Lorry

6 Months Ago

Good point, because every McJob comes with a McThinker! 😃
After reading this, my first thought was to allow another reader to take the lead, then, I would follow. But after contemplating momentarily upon what I would say, I decided to go for it. I'm not even sure that you and I are cast from the same mold, as poets, or simply a manufactured thought. If God IS consciousness, then we MUST be what makes up those flashes of a divine neural network, as you so brilliantly and intellectually pointed out. Wow, imagine that!

Posted 6 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Vol

6 Months Ago

Kelly,
Thank you for going for it! I want to set up a colony where poets can live, write, wor.. read more
Lorry

6 Months Ago

Ps... I thought the same thing Kelly, but I stuck with chickening out! 😃

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Gouge Eye, TX



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My name is Vol Lindsey. I live in Gouge Eye, Texas, a tiny ghost town on Rt. 66. I am a retired creative writing, English literature teacher. I have been writing poetry and reading publicly since 196.. more..