SHHH!

SHHH!

A Poem by Vol

I thought I was in charge of

the words I play with, but

I was wrong. Turns out,

I am the toy, and the words are

using me.

Like when we were cavemen

and first met lightening… FLASH!

YELP! And now, it

has a name...

BLITZ! BARQ! KIDLAT!

Then the rains fell, so we found an alter,

burned a virgin, built a temple and a

church and became Baptists. Or Buddhists,

Or Jains, or Muslims.

WORDS.

Because we had all those wars to fight.


Now, this is important...

the name is not the thing.

Unless you are God.

In the beginning was the

WORD

And the WORD was with God,

and the WORD was God.”

And He talks to Himself

with words. And says

 "LET THERE BE LIGHT.”

In some tongue unknown to me.

Luz, lumiere, licht, luce, hikari,

svet, guang, or by any other name

would shine as bright. So now I think,

maybe I am the WORD’s favorite toy,

and He says, “I AM.”

© 2026 Vol


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Its when the words answer back Vol that you're in trouble!
You reminded me here of long summer days with childhood friends where it was too hot to run around (yes, even in scotland...sometimes) and we would turn into amateur philosophers/ apprentice stoner's trying to figure out what anything meant.
We used to ask such deep and philosophical things such as "why banana. why not floompidoom?" or why the is so important and insignificant at the same time.
But yes, noise became word, from grunting to whatever the early version of Oh for funks sake was when we were trying to get our point across.
But here is a mindmelter for you. Next time you spark that joint, think of God, sitting on a cloud laughing at us as he takes up and laughs to himself at the miss we all made at making up sounds when all we had to do was ask, which we couldn't because we had no sounds to make.
But I think we did not too bad with it and now that we have a word for banoffi pie, we should really just give up on new words, because why need so many words for food when banoffi pie is the perfect noise to make at feeding time? 😀

Posted 2 Months Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

Vol

2 Months Ago


(OH MY GOD!!! OH MY GOD!!!") Somebody did...
Michael Sun Bear

2 Months Ago

I have lived in Washington all my life so was particularly pleased to read the essay on Hell origina.. read more
Curly Grace

2 Months Ago

Damned straight that was an A! lol



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Vol, this is such a clever, lively piece. Only you could make lightning, language, and theology dance together like this. The whole thing feels playful and wise at the same time.

Posted 2 Months Ago


I appreciate how you explained your beliefs without sounding didactic. That's not easily accomplished.
Yeats said that poetry is made out of quarrel with ourselves - when we know what we believe where is the quarrel? I have that same problem often. Does that make me a non-poet or was Yeats just wrong?

Posted 2 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Vol

2 Months Ago


Winston,
It is hard to talk about poetry without Yeats showing up. If Eliot is scien.. read more
W. Barrett Munn

2 Months Ago

I'm more pragmatic; whether or not there is a creator God doesn't matter so why waste thought on it?.. read more
Vol

2 Months Ago

Winston,
Religion requires groups, and formal rules, rituals, and written doctrine...none of .. read more
Dear Vol
words, wherever they were born ( hopefully not in the bible or God) are the pillar of our lives; for without them we would be seriously compromised... I can't imagine a world without them; yes, sometimes they are annoying, yet we must tolerate as best we can. I love your play on words, my friend, you are very clever!!!
Warmly, B

Posted 2 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Vol

2 Months Ago

Betty!
Hey, I hope you are doing well! Thanks for stopping by and commenting... I think what .. read more
I AM THAT I AM is the world's greatest mantram. When we speak it we are saying we are one with that which is. In truth, what more can we require?

Posted 2 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Vol

2 Months Ago

John,
This is the sort of thing you think about when you are born at a Bible college to a thi.. read more
I can't ask Lorry, so I'll ask you, How do we know what is the correct way to say things?
Who decides?

Posted 2 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Vol

1 Month Ago

Eternity,
YOU decide every time you talk. If nobody understands what you said, ya just gott t.. read more
Yes! I love the last part! Well, I love it all!
WORDS.
They are the culprits for sure.
I believe in eternity, we all will be God's CONSCIOUS.
His thoughts will be Our thoughts.
That would answer everything.
Humanity is our downfall.

Posted 2 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Vol

2 Months Ago

Before creation itself, our downfall was planned... might have even been the purpose for creation of.. read more
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2 Months Ago

Vol, and knowing we would keep falling...
A unique use of excellent words. Some of which I will look up. Making excellent points. In other WORDS Excellent.

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1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Vol

2 Months Ago

Ken,
Thank you, man! I had to look them up myself...
Vol
Dear Vol,
This will resonate tremendously with anyone who has a ralationship with words, especially poetry. Words do have a way of toying with us, rather than we them. They are our masters. And don't we love them. What I found delightful here was your relating God to the entire conversation. We were designed in a certain way and since we are all marvellous, I do believe it was intentional.

Posted 2 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Vol

2 Months Ago

Buzzy,
Thanks! Without words, we cannot "think." I have vivid memories from when I was three-.. read more
BuzzyB

2 Months Ago

Your thoughts here speak of the dizzying, spell-binding truths of Nature. They convince me that we'r.. read more
Vol

2 Months Ago

Buzzy,
Amen. It is a great shame that, when it comes to finding and recognizing the God of th.. read more
Its when the words answer back Vol that you're in trouble!
You reminded me here of long summer days with childhood friends where it was too hot to run around (yes, even in scotland...sometimes) and we would turn into amateur philosophers/ apprentice stoner's trying to figure out what anything meant.
We used to ask such deep and philosophical things such as "why banana. why not floompidoom?" or why the is so important and insignificant at the same time.
But yes, noise became word, from grunting to whatever the early version of Oh for funks sake was when we were trying to get our point across.
But here is a mindmelter for you. Next time you spark that joint, think of God, sitting on a cloud laughing at us as he takes up and laughs to himself at the miss we all made at making up sounds when all we had to do was ask, which we couldn't because we had no sounds to make.
But I think we did not too bad with it and now that we have a word for banoffi pie, we should really just give up on new words, because why need so many words for food when banoffi pie is the perfect noise to make at feeding time? 😀

Posted 2 Months Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

Vol

2 Months Ago


(OH MY GOD!!! OH MY GOD!!!") Somebody did...
Michael Sun Bear

2 Months Ago

I have lived in Washington all my life so was particularly pleased to read the essay on Hell origina.. read more
Curly Grace

2 Months Ago

Damned straight that was an A! lol

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My name is Vol Lindsey. I live in Gouge Eye, Texas, a tiny ghost town on Rt. 66. I am a retired creative writing, English literature teacher. I have been writing poetry and reading publicly since 196.. more..