Tell me

I'll allow you to paint my soul your favourite colour

Tell me

 

Tell me that

I’m your only one

and I’ll unpack my

suitcase and give

you my heart

 

Tell me that

your eyes are blue

just for me

and I’ll whisper

life’s secrets in your

ear tonight

 

Tell me that

God gave you dimples

to make me happy

and I’ll let you paint

my soul your favourite

colour

 

Just tell me that you love me,

and I’ll stick around forever.

 

Reviews

[Hotel Mornings]

This is really clever. I love the stanza:
Tell me that
God gave you dimples
to make me happy
and I'll let you paint
my soul your favourite
colour
It's incredibly cute without going over the top and captures the right emotions. The words you use bring me back to the idea of "young love" but also something so much stronger. Connecting both is interesting.