Chained

Will she ever re light?

Piercing cold all around me,
My eyes are closed or perhaps�"
it’s just so dark,
they have long given up hope to see.

Shackles bind my limbs,
though I fail to understand why�"
for even if I manage to leave,
I've long lost the fight in me.

Author's Note

Quite a short one, though I do admit I am quite attached to it. (Honestly I can't even cap no more this is how the education system feels like)

Reviews

[Pallavi]

I am not sure what u quite meant, but to my understanding, it feels like something is stopping you from doing things.

I have felt the same too, not able to move as if my bed had tied chains to my limbs, so telling me not to move.

[Shravya]

Excellent point of view! My opinion on it is that constant binding and restricting has proven me now powerless, so even if someone tells me to break my shell now I won't be able to. But alas, to explain a poem is to betray it is it not?