Beacon

Shine your light.

A flame inside a box is hid

Where no mans eyes can see

Covered by a ebony lid

The flames hungry glee

 

The shadows deeper still

With the flames hid away

With nothing for it to distill

The darkness grows gay

 

Take the lid off of the box

And shine your shining light

For darkness is like a fox

Always ready for a fight

Reviews

[Author Rucha Joshi]

Like the last line,
For darkness is like a fox
Always ready for a fight
It really grabs the attention.
Overall its cool.
rhyme scheme is good too.
Keep it up!!