Cadance

My first attempt at a solemn poem. Enjoy!!!

A solemn drum drones on and on

With its haunting rhythm

Beating like those whom are gone

Taking the music with ‘em

 

Time goes by and the song keeps playing

Beatbeat beatbeat

Never slowing never delaying

It is in itself a feat

 

In the end the song speeds up

Then ends once and for all

For the songs time is now up

And its body with it falls

Reviews

[Author Rucha Joshi]

Hey FYI Thank you very much for you reviews. Its feels great when you get a review for your work. Anyways, for this poem Cadance, I think the vocabulary is best, flow is great. Song, music, ddrum, rhythm, great. For your first attempt at solemn poem, I have to say You Rock!!