It's a feeling that is unavoidable but it comes with risking your heart. I wish there was more of an expansion and a back and forth between you and her. It seems very sudden in it's turn for the worse. Also a reason for the love would help. It is very clear though and conveys its message in a way that i like to see in writing of this sort.
Quién yo soy, lo sé yo, y nadie más deberá saberlo. Aunque si quieren, diré poco.
I'm a mediocre author, whose only writing experiences come from reading. My writ.. more..